Kamis, 03 Januari 2019

Contoh Writing IELTS


Online Games

Recently nowadays many teenagers addicted to online games. This essay will discuss about the main reasons of this phenomenon and afterwards will describe about some possible effects of the problem.
There are many thing which can cause the teenagers nowadays addicted to online games. I believe that the main causes of this problem is that the teenagers nowadays are more interested to play online games than sort out their homework or helping their parents at home. This can be caused by development of online games that are a trend among teenagers today. So, many teenagers today are competing to be able to excel in this online game. And they assume that online game have become their lifestyle wherever they are at home or at school. And they can be proud of playing this online games.
The possible effects of this problem include mind health problem and physical health problem particularly eye health. First of all, the frequency of playing online games can make decrease for our health. First, the example for our mind health, the frequency of playing online games can make addiction and decrease intelligence. And secondly, about physical health its can cause the eyelids bigger and blackened. Thirdly, for our eye health, the addiction of playing online games make decrease eye quality caused too long in front of computer screen.
In conclusion, addicted to playing online games is a big problem that affects a lot of people recently. It is mainly because of lifestyle trends among teenagers today, which make them careless about health.


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